Friday, June 10, 2011

Q&A: What do you think of my story so far?

Question by Cullens4lyf: What do you think of my story so far?
Okay so this is part of my English coursework, I haven't got far but I would like to know what you think and what I should improve on. Also what could eb changed and were could I go from here? Please be honest. A rating out of ten would be good too. So here it is:

In Your Arms
I had dreamt of this moment all my life. All girls do at some point or another I suppose. Although I had not imagined it to be like this, it did not

Lip Plumping

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